Advice on my fanfic plot !

[rei-x8]

Helloo, I need some advice on a plot for my fanfic. It's with a webtoon character.
Basically, Y/N is gonna be dreaming about this boy. For the first chapter, I want it to be kind of introducing her and the guy she's dreaming about. It's gonna be something descriptive so it's not a boring into. It'll kind of describe him as she's in a dream and describe them stealing glances. Once their classes end, they'll end up walking the same way. They talk a bit but end up walking into the sunset in comfortable silence. Just then, she wakes up from her alarm and has to go to school in real life. Does that make sense? That's my idea for chapter 1. I'll post it here as well or I can link my Wattpad.

 

[kpoplover1212]

Okay so here is what I have so here you go
Tips for Chapter 1

1. Sensory Details in the Dream: Since it's a dream, focus on feelings rather than just sights. Describe the temperature of the air, the smell of the surroundings, and the feeling of her heart racing when they steal glances.
2. Describe Him Through Her Eyes: Instead of just saying "he was handsome," describe the way his hair moves, the intensity of his eyes, or the specific way he smiles at her.
3. The Transition: Make the transition from the sunset to the alarm clock sudden to emphasize the disappointment of leaving that world.
4. The "Real World" Reaction: When she wakes up, show her trying to hold onto the memory of the dream, perhaps noting that she can still smell the dream's environment or feel his presence for a few seconds before reality sets in.

Structure Breakdown

• Scene 1: The Dreamscape. Descriptive introduction of the setting and the boy (e.g., in a library, walking through a cherry blossom path, a quiet rooftop).
• Scene 2: The Interaction. The glances, the walk, the comfortable silence.
• Scene 3: The Awakening. The alarm breaks the spell.
• Scene 4: The Reality. Y/N prepares for school, still thinking about him.

 

[˚.🎀༘⋆ pink.roxxe_:3 ˚.🎀༘⋆]

Helloo, I need some advice on a plot for my fanfic. It's with a webtoon character.
Basically, Y/N is gonna be dreaming about this boy. For the first chapter, I want it to be kind of introducing her and the guy she's dreaming about. It's gonna be something descriptive so it's not a boring into. It'll kind of describe him as she's in a dream and describe them stealing glances. Once their classes end, they'll end up walking the same way. They talk a bit but end up walking into the sunset in comfortable silence. Just then, she wakes up from her alarm and has to go to school in real life. Does that make sense? That's my idea for chapter 1. I'll post it here as well or I can link my Wattpad.

Maybe you can make her dreams be called alucid dreaming. Where ever in that world is real for her and in reality she is not Doing so great at school. Also maybe make the dream very detailed

 

[🍓Yunberry🍓]

Helloo, I need some advice on a plot for my fanfic. It's with a webtoon character.
Basically, Y/N is gonna be dreaming about this boy. For the first chapter, I want it to be kind of introducing her and the guy she's dreaming about. It's gonna be something descriptive so it's not a boring into. It'll kind of describe him as she's in a dream and describe them stealing glances. Once their classes end, they'll end up walking the same way. They talk a bit but end up walking into the sunset in comfortable silence. Just then, she wakes up from her alarm and has to go to school in real life. Does that make sense? That's my idea for chapter 1. I'll post it here as well or I can link my Wattpad.

Uhh the best fanfic writers here that I know so far is @KAIDEUN<3 , @ৎ୭𝓐𝓷𝓰𝓮𝓵𝓲𝓬ৎ୭, @˚.🎀༘⋆ pink.roxxe_:3 ˚.🎀༘⋆,uhh IK there’s way more but I just can’t remember who