First fanfic skz hyunjin x y/n ( really short )

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warning ⚠️ this is my first fanfic so might be cringy or personalities might not be accurate and also pls give honest feedback and opinions. So just bare with me k thanks so lets begin
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*~ MEETING BY FATE IN THE HALLWAYS~* part one
The sounds of bustling students in halls and the smell of different perfumes was all noticed by Y/N( whose nose was already aching from the smell),who was trying to find her way through the crowd of student, “URGGGH I hate crowds. They make me feel self conscious” she thought with a angry and uncomfortable expression then suddenly she was shoved by an unknown person, this happen to her so often to her so she braced herself impact, But when she opened her eyes she internally screamed she had just pinned down the most popular boy in school HWANG HYUNJIN THE HYUNJIN.As she looked down at his handsome face she could feel her normal social school life fading away. Hyunjin had a shocked expression but just gave a blinding smile and said hello, Y/N‘s brain stopped working “he just said hi to me ME” she thought (girl I know how you feel 😭).Finally getting her brain to work again she blushed form the close proximity then shivered feeling the murderous gaze of his fan girls -gulp- “ why does it feel like my back is getting stabbed” she thought.Getting up at light speed she bowed profusely and rambled out apologies then ran towards her next class to escape the awkward situatio. While hyunjin still on the floor watched her retreating figure and smiled “usually girls run towards me but she running away from me……… interesting” he thought. Little did they now this will not be the only time they cross paths.Thanks for reading



OK tell me you opinions on this please and thank you
 
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this is a fun concept!!
If I had to give it feedback it would be: pay attention to grammar and spelling. And maybe be more descriptive of y/n surroundings and hyunjin.
But this was good for a first time fanfic!!
Thankssss so much ❤️❤️❤️ I been wanting to write a fanfic but have been to scared to write. Oh and I’ll keep that in mind 😭🤩🤩. Actually made me so happy 😁
 

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Thankssss so much ❤️❤️❤️ I been wanting to write a fanfic but have been to scared to write. Oh and I’ll keep that in mind 😭🤩🤩. Actually made me so happy 😁
No problem!
And don't worry about it too much, you're still new and as you keep writing them you'll improve! Just work on what you can improve and you'll see progress <3
 

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this is a fun concept!!
If I had to give it feedback it would be: pay attention to grammar and spelling. And maybe be more descriptive of y/n surroundings and hyunjin.
But this was good for a first time fanfic!!
Oh and I actually wrote this in class and you can tell I didn’t add much attention to it
 
Thanks you pookie but you can grade it like a test so I know where I need improvement on
Hmmmm...I think just more punctuation, but other than that, it was great for your first time!!
 

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warning ⚠️ this is my first fanfic so might be cringy or personalities might not be accurate and also pls give honest feedback and opinions. So just bare with me k thanks so lets begin
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*~ MEETING BY FATE IN THE HALLWAYS~* part one
The sounds of bustling students in halls and the smell of different perfumes was all noticed by Y/N( whose nose was already aching from the smell),who was trying to find her way through the crowd of student, “URGGGH I hate crowds. They make me feel self conscious” she thought with a angry and uncomfortable expression then suddenly she was shoved by an unknown person, this happen to her so often to her so she braced herself impact, But when she opened her eyes she internally screamed she had just pinned down the most popular boy in school HWANG HYUNJIN THE HYUNJIN.As she looked down at his handsome face she could feel her normal social school life fading away. Hyunjin had a shocked expression but just gave a blinding smile and said hello, Y/N‘s brain stopped working “he just said hi to me ME” she thought (girl I know how you feel 😭).Finally getting her brain to work again she blushed form the close proximity then shivered feeling the murderous gaze of his fan girls -gulp- “ why does it feel like my back is getting stabbed” she thought.Getting up at light speed she bowed profusely and rambled out apologies then ran towards her next class to escape the awkward situatio. While hyunjin still on the floor watched her retreating figure and smiled “usually girls run towards me but she running away from me……… interesting” he thought. Little did they now this will not be the only time they cross paths.Thanks for reading



OK tell me you opinions on this please and thank you
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∞/10 A+ A+ A+ BARK BARKBARKBARKAJVHGFGJBKXHSTYUSTHIYBUTGHFBGXYHUBTFVHYUAXSGBGFVBAZYTBSXGHVHABTSXGHBGXHFVBFYTVHGYBYHFSGYBXH YESH YESH KSGDFYGYXTSBHDYGUJSHEVYHBGYJSUBGJTYSVBTYGJUSTXHYDETSXGYUDTHXDEYSXZjdnc I-I mean it is so good!!
Thanks you so much pookie 😅😊😊😂 ( I love your enthusiasm 😂).
 
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