I think it looks good! I have a talent. I suggest you are buing a new iPad and apple pencil to create the images in digital formats. It is a good way to develop your hobby and earn additional income (if you download these images on some special platforms). I’m a caricature maker, and it is not my main job, just a hobby. Maybe don’t make a lot o it, but I love the process, and it is something that thrilled me. Moreover, I like to see satisfied clients; I would love to develop caricature-making to start making more money.